![]() I like to lightly indicate all important stuff even if it's not visible. I would recommend to slow down a little, to give yourself time to analyze and be clear, (the neck muscles aren't easy ). I don't know how much time you spent on these, but they look like they were done pretty fast. The studies became a little too crammed with lines, so it was hard for me to pick out certain things. Just wanted to let you know in case that wasn't your intention. However if the intention of the crosscontours were to show the major cylindrical form of the neck, then it's correct. In the bottom right one I think the crosscontours on the sternomastoid should be different. In the top right one I think you got the hyoid bone a little small and a little too high up I don't know what reference you used but I think that if I were to lay my hand flat on top of the sternomastoid in the top right image, my hand would be going away from me -> we're looking up at the cylinder. One thing that helps me when I'm unsure of the angle of an object, is to imagine touching it. In the 2 top ones, the crosscontours on the sternomastoid don't seem right to me. Hope this helps :) Keep up the good work! I would recommend drawing the digastricus all the way to it's origin. In the 2nd image, bottom right drawing, what's happening under the jaw could have been clearer. In the 1st image, bottom right drawing, I think we're missing the levator scapulae. I did a picky paintover and fixed the crosscontours that I think might have been a little off. You did a good job with crosscontours in these. Just wanted to make you aware of the possibility. On the other hand practicing with ink could be good too, since it forces you to be more carful and decisive about your lines. Using a tool that allows you to build up to a dark line might yield cleaner results. Your line quality is good for the most part, but in som places you have gaps, wobbles or scratchy lines. I like to use a brush that allows me to draw both light and dark, mimicking a graphite or charcoal pencil. Inking is hard, since the line is always black. You seem to be using a brush that mimics ink. Assuming these are digital, one thing that could make the drawings cleaner would be to switch to a different brush. Hi great job with these! The drawings are easier to read, you're finding the attachments and the crosscontours are better! Nice work!
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